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After submitting their first drafts, students will receive feedback from teachers before submitting the
final draft. In this draft, students should continue developing arguments on the same topic, improve the
first two paragraphs based on the given feedback, and complete the essay in 550-600 words (excluding
the reference list). Students are required to cite at least three outside sources, one of which should be
an academic source. The essay will be submitted via Moodle; a Turnitin report will be generated.
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The following criteria will be used when assessing the final essay:
• Content and organisation (including improvement and development) (40%)
• Format and layout (30%)
• Language (30%)
My Submitted first drafts:
1.Building additional housing is more important than preserving nature in urban areas of cites. Although preserving nature is benefit for city development, increasing the housing supply is the urgently need of Hong Kong’s citizen. Solving housing issue is the first priority in Hong Kong.
2. Over the last decade, housing problem has been a major issue in Hong Kong. The housing shortage and unaffordable housing prices are the root problem that prevent the city development. According to statistics, the average residential floor space in Hong Kong is 155 square feet per household. (Robert C. Schmitt, 2007) Global Living Report (2020) found that Hong Kong is the most expensive city to buy property which average property price reach US1.25million. Most of the land is hilly terrain in Hong Kong. It restricts the land supply and the usage of land need to be considerate seriously. Able to have a shelter is the basic need of people. The top priority of land use should be building additional housing to ease the housing shortage. There are alternative methods to preserve nature rather than occupying the land use. For example, introducing vertical greening designs in building to increase greening area in urban. Nowadays, Green design is applied to new building to reduce the environmental impact of buildings and enhance sustainable development. Vacant land should reserve for building additional housing.