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I am applying for School of General Studies of Columbia University. I have written up to 4000 words about my story and why I want to attend Columbia. Please write in a completely new different way. Change some ideas if you must but use the same story since it is about me. Please re write everything especially from the beginning accordingly as you see fit to around 2000 words. Make sure to change the whole structure, improve as much as you can and please don’t just paraphrase my essay. Help me change it into a essay that will get me in Columbia.